Roses are red, Violets are blue, Today it's spring.... Woohoooo But it means a lot of rain. Sad... :( Why I said spring has a lot of rain is because its wet gross yucky and soggy.
Hi Divya, I agree with Justin- I like your rhyming too! However, your poem would be improved with more verses, more adjectives, an image and more effort. Divya, you need to write a detailed blog post asap or ELT for you my dear. Ms W
To Divya
ReplyDeleteI like your rhymes.
You could make it longer so it will be a bit better.
I also liked the poem.
From Justin
Hi Divya,
ReplyDeleteI agree with Justin- I like your rhyming too! However, your poem would be improved with more verses, more adjectives, an image and more effort. Divya, you need to write a detailed blog post asap or ELT for you my dear.
Ms W