Sunday, August 9, 2015

When I missed the zoo trip

When I missed the zoo trip I was bored horribly bored, extremely bored I had to still do homework. Even if I have to rest still have to study, but I love to read so I literally finished a book in  a day. It was about a egg name jerry. Jerry was an egg that wanted to adventure out one day jerry was trying to swim a pond until a duck came jerry ran so fast he hit a wall and cracked open kinda like humpty dumpty he was sent to the "nursery". Thats the part of the book I liked the most. It was really sad I missed the zoo trip.
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  1. AnonymousAugust 13, 2015 at 5:06 PM

    Hi Divya,
    You are using some good adjectives in your writing. Where did Jerry the egg go on his adventure? I like how you made the connection to humpty-dumpty. We missed you at the zoo. What animals did you want to see? Have you visited the Auckland Zoo website? Please write 10 sentences in your next blog post.
    Ms W
    PS: remind yourself and your blog buddy to comment on each others blog posts

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  2. AnonymousAugust 20, 2015 at 2:49 PM

    To:Divya
    I liked how you connected it to humpty dumty the egg. I wonder what happened to Jerry the egg and also you forgot to make the j capital for Jerry. I also liked how it was funny because it ran straight into the wall.
    From: Justin L

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  3. AnonymousAugust 25, 2015 at 2:41 PM

    Hi divya,
    I like how your using lots of adjectives in your writing, why didn't you go to the zoo? It's got you did 10 sentences.
    From jessica👾

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