Last week it was the speech finals, my favorite speech was Aleena's because I can imagine what it is like if Aleena was the schools principals. The speech I didn't like was Kevin's because I couldn't hear him properly. I like that Aleena used a lot of eye contact, expression and a loud and clear voice. The speech finals were fun except I had to sit on the ground for a Loooonggg time!
Hi Divya,
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing your opinions about the speeches- they were great and I was proud of all the contestants. Bearing in mind that your blog is public please consider how you phrase what you write so it won't hurt another person's feelings. How could you rewrite the sentence about Kevin's speech so it isn't so pointed? Also, this is no way near long enough- I expect a much longer blog post from you with more obvious effort. This is a mere 4 sentences long. Please put more effort into your blogging- pick topics that you are really passionate about. Maybe write about your iExplore?
Ms W